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		<title>The Five Senses</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[When you finish writing your mystery and start re-writing, do you check to make sure you&#8217;ve used the five senses?

We all know what they are: sight, touch, taste, smell and hearing. Most writers us sight and hearing primarily and sometimes touch. Your work will be richer if you can use smells and tastes, too. We [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal">When you finish writing your mystery and start re-writing, do you check to make sure you&#8217;ve used the five senses?</p>
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<p class="msoNormal">We all know what they are: sight, touch, taste, smell and hearing. Most writers us sight and hearing primarily and sometimes touch. Your work will be richer if you can use smells and tastes, too. We &#8217;see&#8217; a lot in books. Beautiful women, tall buildings, the ocean at dawn, but how many writers tell me that the beautiful woman&#8217;s clothes smelled like she just took them out of the dryer? Maybe she smells of some exotic and expensive perfume. Now you&#8217;ve described two very different women by their scent. When your hero touches her elbow does he feel the nubby fabric of her suit? How about the roughness of her working-class elbows? we know immediately that she&#8217;s not only that she might be tight on funds, but also that she has more important things to do with her money than to worry about her elbows.</p>
<p class="msoNormal">How about when a woman rushes to the train station to meet her long-lost lover. They kiss and she tastes coffee, or bourbon or peppermint, or God forbid garlic. How is she going to react? It makes a difference. Perhaps he smells of cordite! Or something darker, brassier, that coppery smell of dried blood.</p>
<p class="msoNormal">It&#8217;s fun to come up with unusual ways to describe the five senses. Instead of saying, &#8220;Tom Barton had the sprinkler going, watering his lawn.&#8221; we say, &#8220;I heard the kissing sound of a sprinkler.&#8221; Can you hear it? How about this one, &#8220;His words came out low and rough, like pebbles from a rusty tin can.&#8221; Want to show how scared a young boy is? &#8220;Freckles stood out on his face like chunks of coal on a mound of snow.&#8221; Or &#8220;The night was dark and beautiful, like diamonds on black velvet.&#8221; Yes, those last two are from my books &#8211; and I must say I rather like them.</p>
<p class="msoNormal">It&#8217;s a mystery to me why more writers don&#8217;t use all five senses.</p>
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